This week in drama we went through the story and the teacher split us into three groups on three. We each had to look at one part of the story each and see how we could perform it. We then had to look at the story that we were given and either perform it to the rest of the group or we would direct them to show them our ideas.
Story 1
How we would tell the story
Our group was the first to teach their story to the rest of the class. We had the first part of the story where Jason's uncle Pelias takes the throne from his father. This then leads to a battle which would be good for our audience as they are young and they are boys which would mean that they like violence as long as we don't make it too gory for them as it may scare them. We then decided to follow the story by Pelias killing the rest of Jason's family and servants so he can take the throne which our audience would also like as it's more violence. We decided that some people would be Jason's brothers and some people would be the servants and that we'd use as many people as possible for this scene. Like in the story, we decided that the mother would then run across the stage dragging a confused and upset Jason with her and would continue to do this why the rest of their family (except for Jason's dad) would be killed so that she can save Jason and he will then return to take his rightful place on the thrown. By making Jason look confused, it would help the Year 7's understand what was going on.
The scene would then change to where an oracle would warn Pelias about the boy with one sandal. We thought that it would be a good idea that the oracle should have a big entrance and maybe even come in with a short song which involves a lot of loud and deep music. We would then have dialogue between Pelias and the oracle which would then lead to her to telling him about the man with one slipper. This would then lead to him getting worried and maybe having a bit of anger which could lead to shouting, depending on who ends up playing the part and Pelias storming out. This scene would have to be quite short thought because the Year 7's may get bored if they just talk for too long.
After that, many years later, Pelias was holding games in honor for his father Poseiden. Jason was on his way to Locus and whilst he was helping and old women across the river,he lost one of his sandals, This old women turns out to be actually Goddess Hera in disguise. She then blessed him for helping her for she knew what Pelias would do to him. We thought that we could have a podium that Pelias would stand on and make a short speech about the games. We could then do a cross-cut between Jason and Pelias. Pelias would be on one side of the stage still giving his speech but would be less lighting on him and he would be speaking in silence. Jason would be on the other side of the stage helping the old lady across. Whilst this happens, there would be a short dialogue between the Old lady and Jason about how kind he is. Jason would then after helping the Old Lady across apologize for having to go and start to walk off but then the Old Woman would take off her hood and reveal herself as Hera who would then bless him. We would have to make sure that when Hera reveals herself, it would have to be really obvious to make sure that the Year 7's understand what is going on.
Jason then goes into the Kingdom and somebody announces that he is the man wearing one sandal and Pelias says that he can have his throne if he does one quest. Jason then happily accepts. We thought that Jason could then go over to the other scene that is happening on the other side of the stage. Somebody in the crowd who is watching Pelias' speech would then turn round and notice him with only one sandal and shouts it out to everyone. Jason then confronts Pelias and there's a short argument and Pelias demands him to go on a quest to get the Golden Fleece and Jason would happily accept and would leave right away to start to get his Kingdom back. We chose that somebody should just shout it out because then they Year 7's could tell what has just happened and won't be confused by anything.
Positives
I think that it's good that we kept to the original story line to make sure that our story will definitely make sense to everybody and we won't confuse anyone. I think it's also good that we made sure that everybody understood on what was going on so nobody was lost on what we were doing when telling the story. I like the idea of the cross-cutting aswell as it isn't too confusing for the Year 7's and it effectively shows how Jason gets to the Kingdom and it shows how one scene then goes into another.
Improvements
I think that we could improve our piece of work by adding more sound effects in to make sure that the audience definitely understands what's going on. An example of this could be the river so that the audience can definitely tell that it's a river that they are crossing. This would make it more suitable for the Year 7's as sometimes they need more information when being told about what's going on and being able to follow a story all the way through without it being lost. I think that we should also put a lift in when Hera blesses him. Jason would start to run off and then Hera would then stop Jason by using her powers. We would then lift him up and make him float gently back to Hera where she would cast a blessing on him and then he would be put down and would continue to run like nothing had actually happened. This would make it more suitable for Year 7's as they find it easier to follow a story visually rather than just speech.
How we taught it
We first told everyone in the class what goes on in the scene and what our plan was on how we would tell it.. We then told everybody who they will be as an example so we could betray it easier. We decided to put people as who we thought would be the best suited for the roles for now. Once we knew that everybody knew what they was doing, we set them up in their starting places and we ran through the scene and we said what was going on and told people what they would do and say through rough dialogues. Once they had asked any questions (if there was any), we would then move onto the next scene. If we thought anybody looked confused, we would ask them if they understood. I think that we could of gone into more detail when telling them what's going on but we had to rush through quite a lot of it because we only had ten minutes to tell them what our plan was before we had to move onto the next group.
Story 2
How they told the story
They first got us all in a formation so it looked like that we were all on a boat rowing it. The idea was so it looked like one of the big Viking ships and that everyone was Jason and his Argonauts. Then we would arrive and the leader of the island which Jason and his Argonauts go up to would come out with some manly and dark music but turn out to be really camp.
Positives
They have included comedy with the leader being really camp which would be good for our audience because all our audience may not enjoy Greek mythology and including comedy would stop them from getting bored. They have also included violence that is good for our target audience as year 7's like violence and our audience is also boys who normally like violence.
Improvements
Not a lot was done and the short time that we had could of been used more productively. They spent too long looking for a formation at the beginning that we might not even use.