Double drama (28th December)

This week we added more to our story by creating a movement sequence for our first story of the brother. It starts with the first person getting a job. This then leads to him going on a dance all the way home. We have decided to make the dance comedic so that the Year 7's stay engaged and also they would find it more enjoyable. He then comes home to find out that his wife has left him causing him to go on a rampage. Then the wife's lover comes round to collect her stuff as she is too scared of him to do it himself as he gets angry easily. This causes a fight to happen between the two and a black-out happens just before the husband kills the wife's lover so that the audience don't know as they find out later that it's the reason why he's one of the three Giants. We thought it would be good to put a fight scene in as Year 7's like violence and would keep them engaged for longer.

I think that we could improve by making our story a bit more clearer so that the Year 7's. Would definitely understand what's going on.