Thursday 8th October

Today we thought that it would be a good idea to start to discuss the difference between woman and wife and thought that the best way to show this would be cross cutting. I thought that this would work well only if we had suitable lighting to go with this to highlight all of the action that is going on. We all thought of individual stories that we could do. I came up with the idea of that they could just talk to the children like in the play that we saw in London (future conditional). I then thought that the bag could just be given to one of the actors that are sitting in the audience. We thought that it would be a good idea to have both of the women to be taalking to a friend talking to each other. Then we changed the dialougue as it sounded much more like a monologue than a dialogue with friends. I think that our group need to plan out dialogue more rather than come up with it spontaniously as it never actually works and doesn't sound good.