9th November

Today we looked at our forced marriage scene again and after looking at our plan for the scene, we decided not to do the idea that they are on holiday as it would be hard for the audience to understand. We also cut Freya's mum's funeral as we wanted to get straight to the point regarding our story and the theme of our piece. We started the scene with both fathers making the final arrangements for the wedding and the transfer of money. We then have the couple trying to talk to eachother with the daughter being very against the forced marriage. The daughter then confides with her friend against the marriage and he's in a position of not knowing what to do. The next scene is the son being assertive towards the daughter showing the verbal abuse that can go on. The scene then ends with the daughter being on the phone with her now husband explaining that the son is in bed and dinner is on the table. This shows that the daughter had no power and the son got what he wanted